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Tuesday, 22 October 2019

Tournament Of Power - NOVEL

                                                                 Deku😅

 We had just started training with our whole class when suddenly a portal that appeared out of nowhere and warped us into this unknown place. By the way, my name is Izuku Midoriya but you can call me Deku I'm a student from UA High School. I got warped into this place along with my friends, Todoroki, Bakugou, Kirishima, and Uraraka. As I looked around I saw all these different people, there was this very tall green guy. When I looked around I suddenly realized we all have two things in common we were all fighters and Heroes. Afterward, a mysterious figure showed up and told all of us what was going on. He said he was holding this tournament with all of us in it, he also said the losing Universal dimension will get erased. The last thing he told us was that it was a battle royale. We took the rest of the time to strategize. We were going to fight in this huge stage they said killing is not allowed the only way to win is to knock them off the stage. Kirishima suggested that we place ourselves in the middle but Todoroki and Bakugou said that most of the other competitors might be thinking of it as well. Once we were all inside the stage, I felt this rush inside of me I think it was excitement. Thanks to Melissa's Full Gauntlet I can use 100% of One For All. Once the tournament started Bakugou and Kirishima left on their own, soon after that Todoroki left too, he said he can't use the full extent of his powers if he was near us. Soon after a warrior with an orange martial artist suit came up to me and told me he wanted to fight. I asked him what his name is he said it was Gohan he was very confident that his universe would prevail. He said he's going to go full power of the bat so he went I think it was called his Ultimate form. I told myself that I should only use 20 % of my power. Gohan charges me with all his might but wasn’t fast enough I stepped out of the way and jumped up and propelled myself towards him and turned on my full cowling and hit him with a 20 % Detroit Smash. Which surprisingly knocked him off the stage, making him the first person to be eliminated.


                                                                   Bakugou😠

 I told Kirishima that we should ambush that tin man (Gilthunder) he agreed so we attacked him from behind, of course. He sensed we were coming for an ambush so he turned around quickly and charged at us with his sword. Kirishima went in front of me and used his quirk to save me from getting any damage from that attack. He used his hardening to attack the tinman while I was in the air getting ready to use my AP shot. But he counted it with his move called Thunderbolt. When our attacks touched each other there was a lot of dust in the air. When the air cleared, I decided to use my Howitzer Impact which thankfully blew him off the stage.

                                                        TO BE CONTINUED

1 comment:

  1. Some exciting storytelling here, Manasa.
    Great to see descriptions of what happened like "...the dust cleared" and "he turned QUICKLY"

    Next you could try to separate your writing a little bit so that it is easier to read. Not to a new paragraph, but just a new line. You do this each time there is a new idea/time/place.
    For example, in your first paragraph: "Afterward" could be moved to a new line so that your writing flows better.

    You could also try including a simile. "It was as if..."
    or "It was just like a..."

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